Good Example of Not Being Concise

If you read this blog with any regularity, you know that I consider conciseness to be an important part of good writing, particularly expository writing, (writing to explain things).

I don’t ordinarily let someone else do all the work, either, but I think this gives a good picture of not being concise, and it’s funny.

Thank you, Analytical Grammar/Grammar Planet

See my comment about being paid by the word a few posts back.