Rearrange That Sentence!

I think I’ve mentioned sentences with more than one modifier a couple times recently. Here’s another one that puts them in the wrong order:

There was another in the service bay being outfitted for a customer that looked sweet.

Sweet-looking customer, eh? Here’s what looked so sweet:

The sentence should read, “There was another one that looked sweet in the bay being outfitted for a customer.”

Remember: Put things next to what they go with!